The Murmur Of Spindrift Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Murmur Of Spindrift

Rating: 5.0


A crab walks straight to show its offspring?
Life is an Ocean and we are waves.
A constant flow to the weeping beach.
Beach struggles to grab the waves but fails
and the foam smiles.

Thursday, September 28, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 29 September 2006

The ebb and flow of life artistically displayed in this nostalgic poem. Fine work, my friend. Sandra

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Goldy Locks 28 September 2006

hey Nimal, i like it. for the reach and pull effect you created.

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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