nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

The Old Sun - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

I am sure this is not a dream
He talked to me seriously.
' Don't publish or let God knows about this,
I want to retire soon as I am really fed up
giving light to all and it seems
nobody wants light, most of them prefer darkness.'
'Both of you take retirement? '. I asked.
' What do you mean by both? '
' Are you going to abandon Moon? '
'It's a misunderstanding my dear
I never loved her.'

Comments about The Old Sun by nimal dunuhinga

  • (5/14/2006 4:13:00 AM)

    Very charming and original write, Nimal. I hope that the sun will reconsider. The world is dark enough already.10 for this.

    Warm regards,

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 14, 2006

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