The One That He Loved Poem by asma bahrainwala

The One That He Loved

Rating: 4.7


When he saw her
The very first time,
All that he knew was
That she was his.

Kind heart, sweet smile,
Those enchanting eyes;
He decided to spend with her
The rest of his life.

Now that she is blurring
Right out of his sight,
Gloom clouds over
His tearful eyes.


14th October 2006
10.47 pm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 26 February 2007

asma... yet again you write Beautifully as always... india should be pround of a daughter like you... andrew

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Reuben Matthew 06 November 2006

another beauty! ! keep up the good work. Reuben.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 October 2006

Succinctly eloquent lament... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Joshua Fegley 14 October 2006

The story of my life....well written, Asma....later.

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Sridhar RVL 14 October 2006

You Got it. and hence 10 from Hope

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