asma bahrainwala

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The One That He Loved - Poem by asma bahrainwala

When he saw her
The very first time,
All that he knew was
That she was his.

Kind heart, sweet smile,
Those enchanting eyes;
He decided to spend with her
The rest of his life.

Now that she is blurring
Right out of his sight,
Gloom clouds over
His tearful eyes.


14th October 2006
10.47 pm


Comments about The One That He Loved by asma bahrainwala

  • (2/26/2007 6:18:00 AM)

    asma... yet again you write Beautifully as always... india should be pround of a daughter like you... andrew (Report)Reply

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  • (11/6/2006 8:12:00 AM)

    another beauty! !

    keep up the good work.

    Reuben.
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/14/2006 9:19:00 PM)

    Succinctly eloquent lament...
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  • (10/14/2006 5:56:00 PM)

    The story of my life....well written, Asma....later. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/14/2006 12:44:00 PM)

    You Got it.

    and hence 10 from Hope
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 16, 2010


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