The Passing Cloud And My Birth Star Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Passing Cloud And My Birth Star

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If the virgin rain cloud in the unfaithful sky that covers my unlucky birth star,
Then I could have relaxed for a while.
A cloud cannot remain in one place any longer as the cruel wind takes her away wherever he goes,
That I know since my childhood.
Oh! This useless star would re-appear and give me the burden again.

Thursday, February 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,childhood,relaxed,star,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 21 February 2008

Very poignant. But you have lived to post 765 poems. That is quite an accomplishment, my dear friend. Warmest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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