The Perfect Crime Poem by Jessy Liz

The Perfect Crime



Bring me down from this high

Find me peace to sleep tonight

Stop my head and all its rushing

In and out- not worth discussing

Mute the lights and dim the sound

God help me for the coming down

Throat is screaming, stomach numb

I'm breaking down just to become

Sharp colors behind heavy eyes:

Perfection by the perfect crime

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 31 January 2008

A powerfully good poem Jessy. You carry it through with verve & panache! Rgds, Ivan

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Vaida Marea 31 January 2008

I really like the intensity and imagery of this poem. It conveys a strong emotion and the tone is very unsettling but in a good way. Nice job!

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