The Power I Lose When I Started To Blame Poem by mona martinez

The Power I Lose When I Started To Blame

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don't know why i'm stuck on blaming,
i guess to give it power to be mad,
can't control the damage,
that i now have to go through,
life seems unfair but,
it only a lesson to be learned,
we can't alway be perfect,
no matter how much,
we want it to be true,
we can't always have what we want,
things happen for a reason,
blaming is just a quit way out,
we blame to take guilt,
put it on to somebody else,
just to feel good,
it only leave you in a cycle,
that seem to repeat itself,
until you say enough is enough,
you take back the power,
to live your life,
no longer do i feel like a slave,
for what had happened,
or feel like i'm in hell,
you got the one thing,
that matters back,
the power you gave up,
when you started to blame.

6-22-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 08 July 2009

blaming does not help some one who indulges in it, it takes away the sheen in them.this last para says it well ''the power you gave up, when you started to blame.' voted10 surya

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Ahtivah Lawton 02 July 2009

sometimes it is hard to except the truth that we may blame things on others than on urself...bcuz we have to much power for our own self...written beautifully

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