mona martinez

A Brand New Me

look at me,
what can you see?
a girl living her dream,
fighting through pain,
just to be her best,
that all she can do,
forget what people say,
they don't know me,
or what i want,
why should they choose?
it's not their life,
SO BACK OFF! ! ! !
let a girl do her thing,
because i freakin sick of labels,
that used to defind who i am,
well guess what?
that not me,
try and put me down,
because your $#! t,
don't work on me,
cuz you see this,
IT'S A BRAND NEW ME! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Copyright © 2009
3-31-09

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 31, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 18, 2009

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  • =Donna Oliver (8/14/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    You go girl! Your poem has a very strong message, one that I personally can really relate to. Keep up the good work :)

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  • Angel Wings (4/27/2009 8:04:00 PM)

    i love this it is a awesome poem 10: -)

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  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/14/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    this is an outstanding poem! magnificent work!

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/10/2009 12:04:00 PM)

    i agree with you my friend. be yourself.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Deva De Silva (4/8/2009 11:36:00 PM)

    I like the new you... a good read!

    Thanks,

    Deva

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  • Twilight By The River (4/8/2009 11:42:00 AM)

    i love it, that is what i really want you to believe in

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