Sheldon Allen Saluta

Rookie (December 26,1991 / Davao City)

The Rain - Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

Waiting a rain to stop is highly ridiculous
Because flash of thoughts overflows
Thoughts of the morbid past
That I used to savage the nature of vast

Sitting here, absent-mindedly, next to the window
And hugging tightly the pillow
Is like a welcomer
Of remnant hurts and pains, letting to severe

Coz rain provokes me to remember the man I loved
The man who took away my dove
And just leave me futile
Abhorred and shunned me just like having an ill

The quotation, “There’s always sunshine after the rain”
Is extremely pseudo and vain
Because after the rain
Tears continually fall down and hurts remain

Comments about The Rain by Sheldon Allen Saluta

  • (6/18/2010 9:00:00 AM)

    I fell like you were in my thought
    It sure can give the pain when the rain is stop falling

    Nice poem
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  • (6/4/2010 8:04:00 AM)

    ohh allen...i have a poem title fearless love..but i asnt able to publish it yet..ill share the few lines..
    rain symbolizes fearless love
    to be like a rain is what i aim
    coz rain dont knw where it wud land
    but it just falls..
    some kind a like that i forgot hehehe
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  • (5/29/2010 2:35:00 AM)

    Rain wets everyone. Move on, without falling into the trap of rainbows.Lovely expression. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/10/2010 1:03:00 AM)

    rainy seasons are almost here in the Philippines! nice poem... if i am a professor, I'll give you an A+ (Report) Reply

  • (5/9/2010 7:59:00 PM)

    Rain as a metaphor for love is refeshing.rain is continuuos.Emotions is part of the whole of love and can't be a part except by one's own experince.Sheldon, a refrehing write (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2010 9:11:00 PM)

    heavy came the rain
    If there is love
    there is also pain
    good write
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

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