Gnawing me
tiny, tiny
as a mouse to a piece of cheese
small, insistently
inside me
as if I had
sin
as if I'd blame
as if I was wrong...
there... aching...
trying to annoy me
not letting me sleep
gnawing me...
the rat and the piece of cheese
inside my chest
and Iam bursting
this feelings
here outside.
sure it has happened for all of us.life is so stressful.just think you are not alone in having such rats, gnawing u from inside~nb
“Iam” bursting. : 0 my favorite lines: “gnawing me... the rat and the piece of cheese inside my chest” VERY AGGRAVATING! I can almost feel it, but luckily I can’t . bri :)
Prick of conscious Gnawing slowly And itches heart with sleepless nights Thoughts of hope will wipe our sins And pray God To clear out debts
Yes! When there are gnawing thoughts your sleep goes to sleep and you're devoid of it! Of course, it happens!
Thank you Thomas. No doubt, it could be made up. That would be a good joke. I enjoyed the pizza. :)
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I would like to translate this poem
Find things that help you feel the most comfortable as you can...when you indulge your senses, you illuminate your mind to be calmer and then you will fine again...p/S nowadays rat not eat cheese anymore, they prefer pizza hahahaha joking_Soul