A boy told me
if he roller-skated fast enough
his loneliness couldn't catch up to him,
the best reason I ever heard
for trying to be a champion.
What I wonder tonight
pedaling hard down King William Street
is if it translates to bicycles.
A victory! To leave your loneliness
panting behind you on some street corner
while you float free into a cloud of sudden azaleas,
pink petals that have never felt loneliness,
no matter how slowly they fell.
what inspired you to get into roller skating I wanted to escape my loneliness
A victory! To leave your loneliness panting behind you on some street corner while you float free into a cloud of sudden azaleas, great write great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
A victory! To leave your loneliness panting behind you on some street corner../// a beautiful poem shared
this is a nice example of how to turn a personal vignette into a charming poem. -gk
Trying to be a Champion! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful poem imbued with a meaningful message. Yes, to leave loneliness is a victory.
'pink petals that have never felt loneliness, no matter how slowly they fell. '... is so beautiful. A nice poem indeed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
great I was only gonna put great but it said 20 characters