The River~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

The River~

Rating: 4.9


Pine river snakes itself through the hills
An unappealing stretch of dried beds and rock
Drought infested-near dry to the bone
A terminal slow death upon Mother Nature's clock;
Ghosts of yesterdays once full river haunt
You can hear them in the eerie wind, they call
Such desperate voices of long past seasons moan
Casting an ambience of deaths mournful pall;
Could an elegy bring honor and acceptance forth?
To the Pine rivers once fulfilling hand?
Or would a somber dirge of melancholy be more apt?
Today, in this, NO MANS, vulture cast land;

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Death-elegant and non elegant ends...read in others poetry..at least two poems with the same title...one with two stanza's and one with four....also, after reading a poem called: 'i repent'...we sort of all put it together and came up with 'someones' death, perhaps in the summer...their elegant end? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Anyway, this write came a bout because of these writings and what we all could come up with. Just proof that no matter what you write you cannot cover your tracks or whitewash what plans you may have had...there are people watching and reading. Thank God. This is a collaberation.
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By, Theo, Sandra, Don, Gary, John and Andrea.

December 6,2012

Thanks to all who have followed it all and took
The time to help me figure things out.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 06 December 2012

Well, Doug, i am glad that you were astonished. This was a collab. It's source sprung forth from the reading of anothers poetry. Those that follow my work, will know and beable to easily digest this piece. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Theo

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Doug Bentley 06 December 2012

There is a sense of wind here, moving water- of gathering and breaking. Astonishingly, I think you've somehow partly created it through letter strings- internal patterns. Masterful craftsmanship. One tiny poem: who will/can ever digest your body of work, except you? Astonishing.

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