The River Of Time Poem by Linda Ori
The River Of Time
The river of time keeps on flowing
O'er wishes and dreams gone unknown,
The worst thing is wanting and knowing
Endearments that never were shown;
Tomorrow is better than never
To speak all those words in your heart,
Don't hold them inside you forever -
Perhaps it's a good time to start
By saying 'I love you' more often,
Let everyone know that you care,
You simply can't take it for granted
And hope they're already aware;
Three little words - you can do it!
Don't let them get stuck deep inside,
Just say them out loud, nothing to it -
Speak up! There's no reason to hide;
That river of time keeps on flowing
The present turns into the past -
Your light should be shared while it's glowing,
So love like today is your last.
A grand piece indeed Linda. I agree that that last line is a corker!
Smooth as Silk, Midnight....A spendid penning, indeed...You have captured this ''Everyone'' scenario, and in doing so, you have capture your Readers! ~F.J.R.~
And this just flows like a gentle stream. The rhythm and rhyme are superb and are matched by the message. You are the non pareil on this territory Linda. Excellent! jim xx
Wow, great stuff, Linda... a wonderful message and brilliantly worded! Brian
Absolutly beautiful piece of work, Top of the class, The wording and mood are perfectly matched to the theme and layout of progression, You have excelled yourself and many others, well done.
Linda, your words are so true, I know from experience how well they hit home. A beautifully written poem with such a lovely rhythm that carries the reader along. I loved it. Thank you for sharing such a great piece. Top marks from me. David
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Love like today is your last. I love that line. Clair