The Source Poem by Linda Ori

The Source

Rating: 3.3


Stardust exploding in infinite sparks
Rivers of gold swirl in circular form
Blackness the drape for celestial art
Wonder and magic infinity's storm;

Darkness and light in continuous flow
Dazzling reflection of diamond dust star
Spiraling orbs in a nebulous glow
Radiant energy waves from afar;

Thoughts of all mortals here on this plane
Highly transcendent they mingle as one
There in the vastness of cosmic domain
Reality's truth is begun.

Monday, January 8, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: magic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 21 January 2007

'Blackness the drape for celestial art' is magic of the poetic kind! A terrific melding of cosmological understanding and poetic talent from the big bang of your creation to the infinite effectiveness of the final composition. I'm wowed. xx

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Danny Reynolds 11 January 2007

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is just fantastic, Linda. From inception to eternity, with a little bringing down to earth. Loved it. Danny

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Raghavan Warrier 09 January 2007

The last stanza is truly remarkable. A diificult idea to convey; but beautifully done.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 January 2007

A sojourn of celestial energies...And the decorum employed here, is sumo-electric Grandeur imagery takes this poem; WHERE NO MAN HAS GONE BEFORE'! Solid quilling Linda...... fRANK

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