The Same Equation Comments

a creative and evocative portrayal sensous appealing to the olfactory as well as the visions and movement

indeed it is different and lovely poem. you have captured the conqurers feel /emotion aptly.lovely and moving.posted 10 surya

beautiful poetry written................10

'The Same Equation....' Is that why you've posted the same poem TWICE? ? Even Einstein would love this equation of yours...This one might even overshadow his... Cheers. Subroto

...............well penned! !

A sensual beautiful quest of love and hope. The fragrance and the fire flies did it for me! 10 Karin Anderson

A tasteful prosaic formula of serenity & sunsuality adrenalises this fine piece of work with silent power....Tight, crisp stanzaic structure affords the Reader a comely, eye-friendly read...Solid Penning, Ravi... F j R

a beautiful passionated well done poem..10+++

This is very sweet 10+

So true Ravi - -' every breath is an urge to live' and even the smallest of creations is avidly looking for the same outcomes..... very thought provoking piece - - and 10 from Fay..

The primordial urge of the God to be that has created this beautiful universe................A Good Write..........

all the variables of 'the' equation well said..

Yes! This life is an endless urge. Very beautiful indeed.

o, yes...same equation for all breathing beings!

A very well articulated poem with zest for life. CP