My heart is racing
My nerves breaking
Tension’s heavy in the air
Euphoria’s waking
My body shaking
Tensed for a scare
Numbing joy
Or shattering pain
One is inevitable,
Like the coming rain
Three seconds
Free of both pain and joy
Three seconds to wait
Feeling like the smallest boy
Either ways... joy or pain surfaces on both ends, its just that the two can never come at the same time! A 10.
i don't need 3 seconds, even if i've to wait all day, yeahhh i'm gonna do it coz all day would make all love! nice piece Tim A +
I love your rhym scheme and and I like the natural flow. An enjoyable read. Ron
Very nice. I really like the rhythm and rhyme of this as well as the unique theme. If you don't mind, I have one little suggestion. I feel that the last line would flow a bit better if you removed the words 'of a'. Other than that, it's great. Well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow the euphoria! ! ! ! ! ! ! of the wait. lovely words and gud rhyming +++++++++++10 dear tim. love anju