Love is like winter
it makes you feel cold
It makes you feel weak
when you want to be bold.
Love is like summer
it makes you feel hot
It makes you imagine
you're something you're not.
Love is like spring
when the world is in bloom
But then you're left lonely
with nothing but gloom.
Love is like autumn
when all the leaves fall
Then love leaves you dying
with nothing at all.
I love the way u use seasons to compare love. But as I read it, in every season it makes it so sad. And I have read all your other poems, and if i compared all of it. In everyone of them is always have to deal with sadness. But this poem i like over all. Keep up the good work. :) **James Wilhoite II**
This one is my favorite! You took me through your seasons of love. The good thing for all of us is that the seasons repeat themselves and hopefully sooner or later we get it right! My best to you and your writing. Now you can touch many on this site. Looking forward to reading more of your work.... J. L.
i love this peice. I like your style but i am going to say it again love is beautiful just like teh seasons because every season have its own beauty and love is the same. its had differnt veiws ways but its always beautiful.
there is no reason to compare love to the seasons. love is love and no matter what you say, it gets better every day. let your soul rule your heart, and then you will see a brand new start. like all the others, it deserves a ten.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like how you compare. There is alot of truth here, even though I hate to admit you're right. Love can be the best and it can be the worst. If you have time, please read my poem 'Fatal Spirit'. Keep up the good work! Deborah Cromer