The Seer (Chapter 01) Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

The Seer (Chapter 01)



Charlie was...
different.
he was just
one of the
kids, and yet
he wasn't.

One day we were playing
baseball against the Glenwood
nine. Awaiting our turn to bat,
together there on that pine bench,

and Charlie turned to me and said
I hate spaghetti
and Mom is fixing spaghetti
for supper.

Then he took his bat
to the on-deck circle
and Eddie turned to me and said
Charlie has been with us all day

so how does he know
what his mom is fixing for supper?
I said, Oh, his mom fixes spaghetti
every Saturday night.

That was a lie. His mom rarely
fixed spaghetti. The truth was that
Charlie always knew things he had
no obvious way of knowing.

Whenever he said something like that,
it always turned out to be true.
The first time I became aware
was when just the two of us

were swimming at the hot springs
in Monroe. Suddenly he said
I think we better get out of
the water. We'll get rained on soon.

There wasn't a cloud in the sky.
I told him he must be crazy.
He just shrugged and got out of
the pool and went and got dressed.

Minutes later big clouds came
out of nowhere, white at first,
and then darker and darker.
I jumped out of the pool as well,

and before I got inside, the raindrops
were already starting to fall.
A flash of lightning and a crash
of thunder, simultaneous almost,

split a huge Russian Olive tree
and sent half of it into the
pool where we had been. I never
doubted Charlie after that.

to be continued...

The Seer (Chapter 01)
Saturday, August 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: danger,friend,friendship,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
part one posted 29 August 2015
Recife, Pernambuco, Brazil

This is not a poem. It is one chapter of a short story. It is suggested that the reader read the chapters in order, although each chapter should be able to stand on its own even if you haven't read the others.
Just find chapter 01, read it and then click the 'next poem' button, which will get you the next chapter.

This is a work of fiction, although some of the people and places are real. Charlie is a fictional character, totally made up. I have never known anyone like the person he is described as being.


Glenwood is a real town, but I don't remember actually playing baseball against a team from there. Mostly we played against a team from Richfield, but we may have played against other teams, too. It's been more than fifty years, so I don't remember.

There really are some hot springs at Monroe, and Russian olive trees are common in that county, but I don't know if there are (or were) any close to the springs or not. Again, it's been a long time since I was there.

Eddie is also a fictional person. I did not know anyone named Eddie back in those days.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 08 November 2015

If all fictional, certainly a great story. Captivating for sure.

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Grace Jessen 30 August 2015

I love this poem! It's great as it is and doesn't need a part 2, but I will be looking for it. I want to know more about Charlie.

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Kelly Kurt 29 August 2015

Have to wait for part two. Hope it is worth it.: -)

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