The Shame Of Bob The Carrot Poem by Aufie Zophy

The Shame Of Bob The Carrot

Rating: 5.0

I met with bob the carrot
And he looked a bit pale
I asked wether he was ok
And he said he was ashamed

Look at my shape, he said
It looks so much like a rocket!
I tried to reassure Bob
Our God created carrots first

Only then humans made rockets
If anyone needs to be ashamed
It are the humans making war
No carrot can be blamed

I was happy to see
That Bob became less pale
He turned as orange as can be

Friday, December 15, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Another poem for children. Hope some adults appreciate it tpp
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent! Beautifully penned. This is how good poetry needs to be. Top score

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M.J. Lemon 19 December 2023

This is a brilliant verse, Aufie. I think you are on the way to a volume, filled with great meaning, for young audiences.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2023

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. Great read for and children.

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