The Silence Of Loneliness Poem by Fredoneth Jonelas
The Silence Of Loneliness
Sees the fear in the sky
The ground indeed not dry
the rhythm of crumbling sea
Sounds no good to me
The night is dark and lonely
Echoing wind sounds scary
As it passes to me
It chills my whole body
How can i be free
Like a free man should be
I am in the cage and lonely
Where freedom is strictly
Listen to thee deeply
Silence trigger deadly
If you are with me
Release me to the safety
Listen to the sound of silence
And think of the existence
I am like a little elf
No one but myself
Your poem structure has a AABB CCDC etc. Format. Nice style and rhyme scheme, along with the poem itself and your personal views on loneliness. ALONE..... As a trade please read my poem Never Meant to Belong - The meaning of a fading life and memory
Very good write, and I can relate to the loneliness! I love it! Thanks for sharing!
This poem showed me clearly that you are a prisoner of loneliness, yet I advice to look for good friends, and you won't be suffering due to loneliness again.Moreover this poem contain deep, honest feelings, well done, and expressed thoughts.thank you.
Excellent poem. You may have a 1000 friends and still feel lonely. It comes from your heart and soul and not a pen. Very good piece of spiritualism. May be that language needs brushes. I loved it. Thanks for reference.
Another great poem rich in it's meaning. Terriffic job well done!
Another great poem rich in it's meaning. Terriffic job well done!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 8:18:28 AM # 1.0.0
Loneliness is sometimes killing and the facts are well established through your poetry..well done