The Skyfall Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

The Skyfall



the abyss being bespoken
sounds more quiet than your fate
and louder than your history
like a body tortured stretched
on an inquisition inventory quest
thus the sky fell and was left lying
pinned in between the lines
in a dying Atlas alas
the words too empty could no longer
stretch the horizon lines
the wordles twisted aflame
were put out one by one
the ashen tattoos on his muscles
a feeble piercing on the tip of his tongue
a circled earring in his ear
twinkling chains around the starry ankles
and a curve unknown around his navel
all of them sing the tune of dust
piercing through the lelek night

Monday, November 5, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: chains,muscles
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maya Hanson 10 January 2014

the abyss being bespoken sounds more quiet than your fate- Great words, i like it a lot! ~mye3

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C N Prem Kumar 15 November 2012

Unique rhyme scheme. Wonderful!

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C N Prem Kumar 15 November 2012

Unique rhyme scheme. Wonderful!

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