Light of my life,
my heart revels
as you kiss
the soft petals of my heart.
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You came and touched my eye lashes
slowly in softness ever pure.
I sink in this
beautiful moment of love.
The soft petals of my heart - the very title touches the core of the innermost layers of the heart. Marie has so beautifully expressed the romance of this poem. She is absolutely right when she says you are the Master Craftsman of sensual romantic verses. In dance, we call the romantic mood as Sringara rasa'. It is beautifully expressed in Mohiniattam. Dr. Tony, you are great! the lyrical dance of Kerala.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the soft petals of my heart. This is a beautiful line, I can see the heart unfolding bit by bit (beauitful) Annette.