The Stanzas Of My Mind Poem by Sandra Fowler

Beautiful, chilling and warming, all at the same time. How do you do it Sandra? (teach me) ! Your poetry is amazing, just perfect! HG: -) xx

dear sandra, the poem has so many layers and i love the part about killing whisipers white...just love it, thanks for the poem. john

Impressive, with the stanzas you used here. It was kind of eerie, but it was great. EXCELLENT! ! !

My favorite lines were the first 2 and the last one, they were very moving. I liked how you used the idea of cold throughout the entire poem, it helped tie everything together.

Love your use of metaphor in this nostalgic poem about what might have been - and what will always remain in memory. The title is compelling - and shows us the poem never spoken. Masterful writing. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxx

It's a wonderful poem Sandra dear.... loved it

such a beautiful poem..........well penned

sandra, you are a candle, both ends burning..... not caring death....just pouring light..... to cast away ignorance......

This is perfection of composition Sandra - and sets the mind all a-ponder with the gentle tunes of love known - - - I applaud you -- from Fay. xx

a fine metphorical expression................10