A star crossed the skies
With my dreams hidden inside
Darkness reigns supreme
may all your dreams come true and life is illuminated with the happiness and bliss god bless you
a lovely senryu...sandra...darkness does reign supreme
A nice one, sandra...... but, why darkness reigns supreme? ? ? Let the dreams shine and remove the darkness forever, dear......
Lovely writing. Could almost swear I already commented on this one, but it seems my memory is as fragile as stardust..(smile)
Wonderful interplay of light and darkness. May your hidden dreams be realized. Love, SandraX
Excellent Sandr! . I like the way darkness reined as the star crossed, like an eclipse. I like the darkness, but not if it is happening to you! A great Senryu. love Karin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In the darkness Star carries hope of light!