diana rose tolentino

The Story Of Us **3** - Poem by diana rose tolentino

God grant me a moment that changed my life
Along with yours when victory came at last
I never gave you up, now I get what I want
A picture of you and I together came to life

Now that we’re together, we live up the smiles
Tender looks can now be found in our eyes
We had overcame the hardest trials of our love
Not a bad story to tell, the story of us.
And before the tender tides, we solemnly deliver our vows

Comments about The Story Of Us **3** by diana rose tolentino

  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (10/4/2011 5:25:00 AM)

    Nice ending, well crafted thought. Lovely. (Report)Reply

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  • Naida Nepascua SupnetNaida Nepascua Supnet (10/4/2011 3:33:00 AM)

    hay, i overlooked your 3rd.
    oh so this is the next chapter of the story
    it is happy ending after all
    i am happy
    you see, if bad things happend already
    no more sadness to come for they have been experienced ahead
    HAPPY ENDING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (10/3/2011 2:06:00 PM)

    It's a nice poem... Great expressions of feelings (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 3, 2011

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