The Summer Rain 1 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Summer Rain 1

Rating: 5.0


Never did I know
Where these drops of rain
fell upon the desert of my heart!

Nor did I know
That rain comes in summer of a life
So plenty, so content, so cool
kissing the virgin lips of my soul
Anonymous, Unconditional, yet spontaneous.

So did these Clouds come-
Untimely, yet fulfilling
Made me wet
Before it rained.
It made everything wet
My Body, my mind, my heart
All my existence,
Wetting the infinite
And never ending Summer
Of discontent and grief.

The Summer Rain 1
Friday, April 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,rain,summer,summer time ,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soumya Ranjan Rout 21 October 2017

So plenty, so content, so cool kissing the virgin lips of my soul It's really a beautiful poem.Thank you sir10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Soumya for trying to read and remark.

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That rain comes in summer of a life So plenty, so content, so cool kissing the virgin lips of my soul Anonymous, Unconditional, yet spontaneous. Subhas Chandra ji, Your poem is beautiful! Full 10 for you Sir!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Ma'am for these remarks, so kind, gracious and inspiring. The response was so much delayed as I had so little resource those days to do so.

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Sabita Sahoo 31 May 2016

Never did I know Where these drops of rain fell upon the desert of my heart! Nor did I know That rain comes in summer of a life So plenty, so content, so cool kissing the virgin lips of my soul Anonymous, Unconditional, yet spontaneous. Nice and beautiful.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Sabita for these remarks.

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Expressed well, nice reading, thanks for sharing sir, please Read my poem onRAINand give your comments.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thank you sir for the great remarks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

It made everything wet! ! Nice piece of work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks for the inspiring remark sir.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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