The Summer Rain 2 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Summer Rain 2

Rating: 5.0


Ever since you left
It had never rained.
Not a single cloud
Has dared a cat walking
On the corridor of my sky.

Colours have forgotten
Their names and canvasses,
Their fluidity of brushes,
Except these dry spots of past.

Clouds have forgotten
Their wings of desire,
Their feathers of dreams,
Except the abandoned traffic posts.

Ever since you left
It had never rained
Not a single cloud
Has dared flying across
The Eastern or western sky.

The Summer Rain 2
Friday, April 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,love,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,summer,summer time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Sahoo 21 July 2016

Clouds have forgotten Their wings of desire, Their feathers of dreams, Except the abandoned traffic posts. Beautiful.thanks for sharing it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Sanjukta for the remarks, so sweet of you.

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Another classic poem.! Subhas Chandra ji, Your imagery is superb! Just cannot leave without another full score!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks revered Ma'am for your kind remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 08 June 2016

Clouds have forgotten Their wings of desire, Their feathers of dreams, Except the abandoned traffic posts. Beautiful stanza here. I love this poem. Thanks.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Sabita for the remarks, so sweet of you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Clouds have forgotten their wings of desire! ! Nice piece of work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Sir for the gracious remarks, so sweet of you.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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