The Summer Rain 3 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Summer Rain 3

Rating: 5.0


Like the wet grass

Moist with the downpour

Of the Rainy night

I store your foot prints

On my heart.


Like a grasshopper

Of the green meadows

From horizon to horizon

I dance to your tunes,

And the lyrics unsung.

The Summer Rain 3
Saturday, April 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,heart,heart love,heart song,longing,love,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Norah Tunney 02 April 2016

This touches some deep inner core You capture the essence in these few short lines Subhas This is what true poetry is for me

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 21 October 2017

Like a grasshopper Of the green meadows From horizon to horizon I dance to your tunes, And the lyrics unsung. It's such a lovely poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Soumya for the remarks, so sweet of you.

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Sabita Sahoo 22 September 2017

Like a grasshopper Of the green meadows From horizon to horizon I dance to your tunes, And the lyrics unsung. The lyric unsung. Thanks poet.10++++

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

Silver moon of moonlit sky, Anchors the night less dreams high Nights of endless waiting for him, Kindle the desire, yet keep her calm Ever she wanted a divine hug Timeless, Endless, embracing fog. Wow, a very beautiful song of heart sung to another. Thanks poet for this powerful love poem. 10++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Priyanka for the remarks, so sweet of you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 September 2017

thanks for your seasoned comments on mom smiles now do let me know with links which ones you want me to read the working about on this site is very complicated

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Sir for the kind remarks, so sweet of you. Soon I would select a few for you. Till then, will you read the sonnets of poems and Myriad of sad songs?

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Nudershada Cabanes 15 September 2017

I store your footprints on my heart. A lovely poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Sir for these inspiring remarks, so sweet of you.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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