The Sun Roof Top Poem by Zumas Millamo

The Sun Roof Top

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On one sunny day when sky was so clear
I hit the road with confidence and no fear
my car sun roof is open with wind in my hair
flying on the wings of an eagle, beyond compare

But as I drove further felt a burning sensation
something I felt like emotions in conflagration
my thoughts ablaze like fiery coals
as the the sun's beams seared into my soul

I pondered the depths of life's mystery
Why does pleasure come with agony?
Is it the nature of all things true
That joy and pain are entwined with glue

As the sun's rays kissed my very core
I swore to embrace the heat, explore
for within the burn lies the seed
of a life well-lived, a soul indeed

So I welcomed the fire, let it ignite
a desire within, to reach new heights
with burning passion, I forged ahead
the sun's roof top, my dreams widespread

For life is not merely a placid repose
but a wild journey, where the heart's exposed
and when the fire inside is given its due,
that burning sensation can lead to breakthrough

So let the sun roof top be my guide
as I navigate life's winding ride
embracing the burn, I'll rise above
and find true bliss, fueled by passion's love.

Wednesday, June 28, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 30 June 2023

Joy and pain are entwined with glue is 100% true dear revered poet.

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Juhaina Tumlu 29 June 2023

Lovely poem, For life is not merely a placid repose but a wild journey, where the heart's exposed and when the fire inside is given its due, that burning sensation can lead to breakthrough.

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Sando Hussam 29 June 2023

Lovely built-up for a super motivational poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 29 June 2023

Passion carries everything, it can lift us to the heights we can never imagine. Nice poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 June 2023

Beautifully inked. Loved it. Keep going. Thanks.

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