The Swan Comments

The swans are the most gracious creatures...The poem reminds me of the Yeatsian universe evoked in The wild swans at Coole. Magnificent poem! 10 +++

this poem is like a bride in full decoration.how wonderfully you wrote it.imageries are speculative! ! ! ! so many portions, impressed me a lot especially As the sun sinks gently Into the glow of the evening sky. Floating like an autumn leaf That's moved by a whispered breeze.

Wow, excellent poem, , so soothing lines I feel so!