The Teasing Splinter Poem by Akhtar Jawad
The Teasing Splinter
Dear Splinter, go on teasing me,
How sweet is a friend who likes pleasing me,
I know you just want a smile on my face,
I love your words, it's glace and grace,
But how you'll see that I am pleased,
How I enjoy when I am teased,
We are pen friends never shake the hands,
You fly on skies of the far southern lands,
I am sitting on the shores of Arabian Sea,
I wish we could share a cup of tea!
Let us share words like two loving friends,
Teasing is a color that nicely blends,
Ocean that joins us has moving waves,
Teasing fairies and the pleasing knaves,
Friends can change the color of the sea,
I can see your face in a cup of tea,
Teasing and pleasing we can see on the clouds,
Ugliness of time is covered in shrouds.
Clouds that rise from the deep blue oceans,
Are free to fly and carry such emotions.
One more thing I named you a Splinter,
We all are pages come out of a printer,
I am chasing you, the lovely first page,
Seventy years old I'm running like a sage,
I love to chase it's a source of delight,
As you remain throughout in my weak eye sight,
When you turn your head and see me chasing,
You look beautiful with your teasing so pleasing!
What a brilliant friendship poem... :) ;) friends are life without them we are nothing [3....... Awesome poem! ! !
Hmm....... What a pleasant surprise! I have been away from home till evening and when I opened the computer, I saw your message.... but was not free to see the poem! Oh, this is just amazing.... What a wonderful tribute to 'poor' me..... I feel honored....! So do you mean to say that hereafter I will be called 'Teasing splinter? ' I enjoyed this poem so much! I feel that poems are at your fingertips... Akhtarji ! ! How unlaboured they flow...... Beautiful diction! Thank you so much!
What a friendship! What a beautiful story of teasing and pleasing! The poem is simply amazing! Loved reading it! ..........10
a lovely poem for friendship...........10++ very beautiful lines 10+++...... I know you just want a smile on my face, I love your words, it's glace and grace, & Friends can change the color of the sea, I can see your face in a cup of tea, with nice rhyming manner a outstanding poem full of enjoyment, love, naughts, emotions, etc.....
most interesting lines so far: Friends can change the color of the sea, I can see your face in a cup of tea, ........................ i'm not sure if either of these actions is possible, but you've suggested them in a nice rhyming manner! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I love to chase it's a source of delight, As you remain throughout in my weak eye sight, When you turn your head and see me chasing, You look beautiful with your teasing so pleasing! ................ Ah! NOW i see that i have competition for Valsa's affections! ! ! : ( i taught Valsa all she knows about teasing. ha ha. bri :)
What a delightful poem. I am wondering if we will here an answer from Valsa's pen. So enjoyable would be the exchange from two of my favorite poets. God bless you Akhtarji. Keep writing!
great dedication to a friend....nice....Ocean that joins us has moving waves, Teasing fairies and the pleasing knaves, Friends can change the color of the sea, I can see your face in a cup of tea,
Wonderful friendship poem with nice rhyming. Nice tribute poetess Valsa George. Already she appreciated your words in poem. Honour through words with perfect poem. Imagery and presentation both are nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A beautiful and interesting tribute.....................10