The Thief (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

The Thief (Senryu)

Rating: 4.3


Kneeling in the pew
Eyes lowered in devotion
Who would suspect him?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 October 2009

i really wonder what his prayer would be...the big level thieves donate a percentage to god even..the concept of god...i think differs from person to person

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Kostas Lagos 10 September 2017

A good thief is the one noone suspects! Very nice!

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Sonya Florentino 08 October 2009

great senryu Sandra! ...but let me play devil's advocate...maybe he finally saw the light and is there to ask for forgiveness... or maybe to ask for help to make him stop his evil ways... we never know do we... only the one he's praying to (or pretending to pray to) really knows......

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Patti Masterman 04 October 2009

Yes, the worst ones on earth share our dna..it seems a sacrilege, really? Loved the stark portrait of the thief with pretend innocence and normalcy.

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Ramesh T A 04 October 2009

It's like wolf in the garb of lamb! Nice!

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Susan Jarvis 04 October 2009

This wonderful senryu laces seventeen syllables with intrigue and menace. S :)

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