dan hub

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The Thought Of Me Loving You - Poem by dan hub

I thought that I loved you
I thought that I knew
All the people would hate
I said that I didn't come late

The time when i was young
you almost got shot
That day I found I'm everything.... You're not
Dad was a drunk
He would have loved me but he felt he had sunk

You never respected me
You never knew i exist
All the kids punched me, Kicked me, Kill me
You didn't even resist

I thought you were once a heroe
But i was dead wrong
Now your pulse is zero
and you're completely gone

After you left i was happy
but then i turned mad
Sometimes dad would slap me
That would make me kill him and i would go mad

By the time i loved you
I haid already said
I wish you were here right now
but you were already dead

the days went by so slowly
when you got shot dead was real lowly
he was the one who killed
this i know
but the thought of me loveing you is so hard to do

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  • Katrina Pilon (4/3/2009 9:38:00 AM)

    i love very romantic and poetic keep it up (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, April 3, 2009


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