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Saturday, September 19, 2009

**************the Touch**********************1979

Rating: 2.8
i looked up into the deep blue sky
little white clouds were floating by
i looked upon this young girls face
she held it down in disgrace.

i looked upon her cheeks so fair
she looked up to me to see if i care
i looked at her with content
and she knew right there it was heaven sent.

she smiled at me, and our eyes then touched
we knew then, it was much to much.
our hearts entwined and her lips met mine
we felt right there it was a love divine.
louis rams
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016
Into the deep blue sky! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.
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Louis Rams 04 April 2016
thank you Edward for your comment
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Sandra Fowler 10 June 2010
Romance is alive and well in this fine lyric write.Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
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Kesav Easwaran 23 May 2010
from clouds white to clouds nine...romantic piece...gracious presentation...i liked...10
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 January 2010
‘…we felt right there it was a love divine…’ Rhapsodic state reached…and final culmination what we pine for… Thanks for sharing… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2009
she smiled at me, and our eyes then touched we knew then, it was much to much. our hearts entwined and her lips met mine we felt right there it was a love divine...it is unique divine touch and happens to only few gifted individuals with pure heart... lovely poem with very good message in it... i love it.....10 read mine anywhere..bbutterflies around and colour
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Shashendra Amalshan 19 September 2009
I loved this rhyming couplet.. 'our hearts entwined and her lips met mine we felt right there it was a love divine.' very nice to read.. lovely poem indeed.. filled with emotions..10 regards shan
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 September 2009
a beautiful romance bornthere at that moment....lovely poem
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