The Trinity Poem by C. P. Sharma

The Trinity

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He is the creator,
You are the nourisher,
I am the destroyer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 August 2009

The circularity of life expressed with wisdom and without clutter. Impressive poetry. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 August 2009

beautiful sir...you have combined the three...'he'...'you'...and 'i' on which you had already written seperately...and this short poem defines the three in 3 lines and how they are connected.....

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Raj Nandy 20 December 2009

For the Western world the Father, the Son and the Holy Ghost are all the same! And so is Bramha, Vishnu & Maheshwar, - though with different names, they unite to form the eternal cosmic chain! A GOOD HAIKU with a perfect ten! -Raj

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Sandra Fowler 13 August 2009

Deep thoughts become the quality poet. Write on. Always your friend, Sandra

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Irene Clark-hogg 12 August 2009

I think you are also a creator. You present us with such beautiful words containing so much meaning. Irene

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Bonnie Collins 11 August 2009

You have a very good way with expressing very strong statements with very few words, very powerfull and to the point.... Excellent.... bonnie

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Ana Zaldivar 11 August 2009

Wow.. So short but with a really strong meaning... He, you, and I.. expressed with wisdom of the world.. Incredible..

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Bissau, Rajasthan
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