The Understudy Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

The Understudy

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At first glance, he seemed so young,
And so small...
'He's only thirteen' someone whispered.
Only thirteen and holding everyone
In the palms of his hands with anticipation.
We were entranced by his poise as he
Approached the podium..
His back was straight, his head high,
He was in total control.
He acknowledges the applause with a
Slight manly bow
He raises the baton, turns slowly to the orchestra...
He falters...but for a moment only.
Scattered muffled laughter throughout the crowd...
We are aware of his own silent laughter, his
Shoulders shaking.
Our little giant raises the baton and suddenly
There is only the music...
We are mesmerized.
Every movement captivates and enslaves our hearts.
We explode with applause when he takes his
Final bow.
'Encore! Encore! ' we chant.
He turns, and raises his baton, again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 19 March 2008

Thank you for the list Dorothy. This is what I was looking for. A complete statement in prose description. You are clearly the writer I thought you were. I'll read another. GW62

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Brian Dorn 18 March 2007

Brilliant imagery depicting a marvelous scene... everything combines in creating a wonderful mood. Well done, Dorothy! Brian

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David Harris 18 March 2007

Dorothy, this is a very enchanting poem so beautifully written. The flow seem to drift along like a gentle stream taking the reader along with it. Great write. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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