Hanna Maria

Rookie - 367 Points (Mesa Arizona)

The Unknown - Poem by Hanna Maria

Keep me away from those wandering eyes
I am hiding, Hiding in Disguise

All those I’ve loved, I pushed them away
So they departed, Departed in Dismay

I will never stop moving until I am free
They are searching, searching, Searching for Me

The light has gone, it is no longer day
I am losing, losing, Losing my Way

Here I stand so cold and frail
They try finding, finding, Finding my Trail

But it is too late If only I’d known
Now I’m dying, dying, Dying Alone...

Topic(s) of this poem: freedom, lost, regret


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It's good sometimes to try to find your own way but don't think you have to do it all by yourself, don't push away those that would help you

Comments about The Unknown by Hanna Maria

  • Sarah Persson (1/16/2016 6:48:00 AM)


    Very good piece of poetry Hanna (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/12/2016 2:08:00 AM)


    But, you will known one day. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/23/2015 6:25:00 PM)


    ''don't push away those that would help you''

    a good write, wise Hanna! ;)
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  • (10/23/2015 1:42:00 PM)


    While reading the poem i felt myself
    Hiding
    Departed
    Wandering and
    Dying.
    Great power of expression. I like this poem.
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  • Kelly Kurt (10/23/2015 12:53:00 PM)


    Nicely written, Hanna. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (10/23/2015 12:47:00 PM)


    Beautiful and meaningful poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2015



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