The Very Painful Poison Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

The Very Painful Poison

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I have knowingly drank the very painful poison
I have given my soul without any condition!

The more I look at her the more the pain
Why I love her so much without a gain!
I can’t stay away from her; I meet her to die
I want such a sweet sorrow so that I can cry!

The more she burns me with her laughter
The more the thirst becomes to love her!
The more I want the bliss of her love
The more the warnings come from above!

Saturday, January 7, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: laughter,sorrow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Russell 10 January 2012

Yes, you have it right what we want is not always the best for us.

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Jacqui Broad 09 January 2012

Why is it that we sometimes love what is not good for us? A great poem, Asif!

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Ebi Robert 08 January 2012

I would love to see this sweet bitter love. Asif. Welldone.

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Vipins Puthooran 07 January 2012

The more she burns me with her laughter The more the thirst becomes to love her! The more I want the bliss of her love The more the warnings come from above! I really like these lines; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; .excellent! ! !

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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