The Very Painful Poison Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

The Very Painful Poison

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I have knowingly drank the very painful poison
I have given my soul without any condition!

The more I look at her the more the pain
Why I love her so much without a gain!
I can’t stay away from her; I meet her to die
I want such a sweet sorrow so that I can cry!

The more she burns me with her laughter
The more the thirst becomes to love her!
The more I want the bliss of her love
The more the warnings come from above!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Russell 10 January 2012

Yes, you have it right what we want is not always the best for us.

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Jacqui Broad 09 January 2012

Why is it that we sometimes love what is not good for us? A great poem, Asif!

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Ebi Robert 08 January 2012

I would love to see this sweet bitter love. Asif. Welldone.

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Vipins Puthooran 07 January 2012

The more she burns me with her laughter The more the thirst becomes to love her! The more I want the bliss of her love The more the warnings come from above! I really like these lines; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; .excellent! ! !

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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