The Weeping Soul Poem by Rini Shibu

The Weeping Soul

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When you are taken away from this world
In your prime when family is left behind
When your physical body dies
And your beloved mourn for you
The soul has to go to different world
And it hesitates to leave the loved ones
Soul which tries to stay with them
Witness the pain they go through
Tears rolls down their face
It's hard for them to live without you
And the soul rises up to the skies
And if you beg God to see them
Just one more time from afar
And you find them living happily
Doesn't mean they don't remember you
But they are forced to live a busy life
To live normally in your absence.

Wednesday, August 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: body,mind,reality,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 August 2017

Dear Rini, I am glad that you have enough knowledge on soul and body, birth and death and about the different world. Yes, soul weeps for his kindred after death for not to leave them but he is forced to go as per his karma to next birth. A beautiful spiritual poem shared.

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Stephani Kievaughan 23 September 2017

edit suggestion you have two plural words beside one another (bodies dies) should be body dies

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Stephani Kievaughan 23 September 2017

for those of us with faith we must ponder what the afterlife is Like. some of us even empathize of how the dead may feel in their infinite consciousness...surely in their parting they grieve for us as well with our being on the other side of existence Life will be far shorter than the afterlife one has to wonder which side of the equation is more important

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thanks for your insightful comment..and for the suggestion.

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Mark Otieno 25 August 2017

Beautiful poem....Its often hard to move on from those you care for and am glad you've just shown how harder its even is when one is dead.....

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

Thanks Mark for visiting this poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 August 2017

The soul rises up to the skies! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 20 August 2017

Thanks Edward for reading this poem

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Richard Thomas 17 August 2017

A very good poem that reflects after death

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Rini Shibu 17 August 2017

Thank you so much...

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