Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 93,323 Points (1978 / India)

The Way - Poem by Rini Shibu

You showed me the way
And then decided to stay away
I wished to walk together
No matter what's the weather
It hurts when you turn your back
It suffocates me as in the sack
You left me to be alone
To stand on my feet by my own

Topic(s) of this poem: way


Comments about The Way by Rini Shibu

  • Robert Murray Smith (6/7/2018 2:48:00 AM)

    Those who show the way do not always stay. Good write.++10 (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (3/20/2018 10:08:00 PM)

    A poignant write that echoes an important message: To stand on our own feet. A great piece.10 (Report)Reply

    (3/21/2018 12:36:00 AM)

    Thanks Rose for your wonderful comment

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  • (3/19/2018 10:32:00 PM)

    This is a very heartfelt poem about the way. (Report)Reply

    Rini Shibu(3/20/2018 6:05:00 AM)

    Thanks Cole for visiting this poem

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  • Nudershada Cabanes (3/19/2018 10:49:00 AM)

    The feeling of being left alone is hurting to the soul. A sad poem Rini.10 (Report)Reply

    Rini Shibu(3/20/2018 6:04:00 AM)

    Thanks Nuder for reading and posting your comment

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/19/2018 9:48:00 AM)

    You left me to be alone
    To stand on my feet by my own........here is the essence of the poem. Beautiful poem with nice theme. Thank u Rini for sharing this.
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    Rini Shibu(3/20/2018 6:03:00 AM)

    Thanks Kumarji for your encouraging words

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 19, 2018

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 24, 2018


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