The Way Poem by Rini Shibu

The Way

Rating: 4.5


You showed me the way
And then decided to stay away
I wished to walk together
No matter what's the weather
It hurts when you turn your back
It suffocates me as in the sack
You left me to be alone
To stand on my feet by my own

Monday, March 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: way
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 07 June 2018

Those who show the way do not always stay. Good write.++10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 March 2018

A poignant write that echoes an important message: To stand on our own feet. A great piece.10

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Rini shibu 21 March 2018

Thanks Rose for your wonderful comment

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Lamar Cole 19 March 2018

This is a very heartfelt poem about the way.

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks Cole for visiting this poem

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Nudershada Cabanes 19 March 2018

The feeling of being left alone is hurting to the soul. A sad poem Rini.10

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks Nuder for reading and posting your comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

You left me to be alone To stand on my feet by my own........here is the essence of the poem. Beautiful poem with nice theme. Thank u Rini for sharing this.

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks Kumarji for your encouraging words

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