Thoughts Poem by Rini Shibu

Thoughts

Rating: 4.8


The intrusive thoughts are like cyst
which may grow inside you
Causing pain and discomfort
When shackled for long in your body
it may burst one day to create a mess
Get rid of this mess or just
Ignore if it is harmless lump of thoughts
Let it shrink and disappear from your mind
Be relieved from the pain and distress
And attain a lasting comfort

Tuesday, January 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
White Tiger 09 February 2018

Yes, peace of mind is peace of body and soul.

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Rini Shibu 09 February 2018

Thanks Charlie.! !

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Rebecca Navarre 22 January 2018

Very Beautiful, Truthful And Calming Thoughts! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 23 January 2018

Thanks Rebecca for visiting this poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

Get rid of this mess or just/Ignore if it is harmless lump of thoughts..A precious write! Thanks for sharing Rini

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Rini Shibu 19 January 2018

Thanks Dillip for your comment Rini

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 January 2018

A very positive write beautifully penned.

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Rini Shibu 17 January 2018

Thanks Rose for your kind

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Kishore Kumar Das 16 January 2018

Thoughts......of pleasure and pain..........can be effectively translated into words....the magic medicine embedded in your lovely lines.......thanks for sharing......

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Rini Shibu 16 January 2018

Thanks Kishore for reading and commenting

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