Their Loving Place Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Their Loving Place

Rating: 4.2


She walked for miles,
Right to that place,
And on her arrival,
A sad look came upon her face,
For this was the very spot,
They'd sat and kissed,
All those many years ago,
His love was truly missed,
She called out,
I love you,
I always will,
I'll never forget you!
The air felt still,
And there on a tree,
A Robin sat,
He sang his song so sweetly.
Come closer she said,
I know your here.
You are my sign,
To know your near.
Then home she walked,
His memory deep,
For that was their place,
To remember,
Her place to weep.

Jayne Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 19 March 2022

A mystically beautiful experience eloquently expressed in succinct verse. Loved it!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 March 2022

A beautiful poem. More than your poetry, I like your philosophy that face the moment despite all odds. Live for your necessity not for needs of others!

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Jayne Louise Davies

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