Then, Now, Time Again... Comments
No, no I ain't ever been
no princess...Only in my dreams,
am I. And no, no I ain't ever
seen the country, wide. On, no
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Your poem addresses a complex subject head-on with no hesitation or prevarication. It's the issue of our desires being so much larger and numerous than our realities. You have suppressed those desires having grown older but now you realize they had the value of enriching your life, giving you momentum. And you are engaged in a resurrection of sorts as you rediscover the happiness you felt when you harbored such hopes in your soul. Brava! ! ! !
Hi Becca, A wonderful poem, just showing what a talented Wordsmith you are. The slangish language you start the poem with and the progress in language as we progress in the poem, reminds us of the Great George Bernard Shaw in Pygmalion. Great work..100+++
Thank You! ! ! Unnikrishnan, You Are So Very Kind! ! ! ! ! And Thoughtful! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Ever So, Very Powerfully Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !
In high castle eagles cry and this amazes mind more. No princesses, but dreams do magic here. Riding ever high castle brings amazing idea of expression in imagery. Open eyes have seen reflective light of sun. Every once in a while life's youth is wonderfully expressed. An Amazing poem! ...10
Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, Your Comments Are Much Appreciated! ! ! ! ! You Are Very Kind! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Painted, With Such Inspirational Beauty And Awe! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !
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12/10/2025 6:43:26 AM # 1.0.0
A fabulous poem! Beautifully written