M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Then Why? - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

You call him, he will not respond!
Then why think about him?

The one who leaves you crying
Why should you question him?

The one who lives with self
Why should you ask him about life?

Topic(s) of this poem: life, satire

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

बुलाकर जो न आये उसका ख्याल क्या करना
रुलाकर जो चले जाये उससे सवाल क्या करना
खुद अपने आप में रहता है वो सदा
उससे ज़िन्दगी का सवाल क्या करना

Comments about Then Why? by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/4/2016 12:34:00 AM)


    Emotional; with the muse of love and pain. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/24/2015 8:22:00 AM)


    Mujhe kisi ka sheyr yad aa geya,
    Aana to khafa aana, jana to rula jana,
    Aaana bhi hay keya aana, jana bhi hay keya jana.
    Magar yehan to muamla yeh hay koi bulakar bhool geya aur na aaya, to bas samajh lein use ek saya, wuha zindigi ke andheron mei keya sath dega.
    (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/23/2015 12:45:00 PM)


    There should be no question while love ties life and we hope love life responds on deep expressive emotional attitudes. Wonderful drafting shared....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015



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