Therapeutic Dish Washing Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Therapeutic Dish Washing

Rating: 5.0


Filthy cup
Just soaking
Detergent
Sprayed throughout
Saucer now
Deep dish dirt
Floating forth
Dishing dirth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 19 July 2017

M.J, thank you for thinking that the last line is perfection. And yes, the metaphor is most definitely there!

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Mj Lemon 19 July 2017

That last line is perfection, Richard. And as I reread the poem for a third time, I realize that your words can stand as a metaphor for a conversation I had just this morning. Great poem, Richard. A 10.

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Rajnish Manga 17 July 2017

I love the way you have taken up the topic and treated it as a meaningful experience. The comments and your reply are quite interesting. Thanks, Richard.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 July 2017

Rajnish, dish washing can be a meditative experience. Thank you for reading and commenting. Always greatly appreciated!

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