Drifting in the lonely redwoods, I met a monstrous leviathan
By switching his homes and names - hermit and egotist heinous
Loner, sequester and seclusionist are his names - atrocious!
Lonely dybbuk visits every home gifting a rocket to you and me,
Think-tank! Sink-sank! A lonely pink rose shrinks in only garden!
I'm taking blows of west wind in barren land, cries a lone hand;
I'm sitting with empty ache; I'm a fruitcake in the lonely land!
I'm a blue star in the night sky; lonely car in the lonely street.
In darkness, I'm in rivers of blood and fears; is it solo treat?
Think-tank! Sink-sank! A lonely pink rose shrinks in only garden!
Lonely I am, I sit and stare; stand and care, yet a lonely stick!
Lonely I am, I feel pain; I cry my eyes out with lonely lipstick!
Lonely I am, like it or hate it, I feel and deal in lonely date;
I don't want to be lonely, I'm with me yet I'm alone, is it fate?
Think-tank! Sink-sank! A lonely pink rose shrinks in only garden!
Today I'm in sorrow, I don't know tomorrow, sings a lone sparrow;
Lonely in the morning I wake in the life of fake for lonely sake;
Loneness burdens, a gutless fight, a pitiless fall, a story fake!
I don't want to die, but I can't bear it anymore says a lone arrow
Think-tank! Sink-sank! A lonely pink rose shrinks in only garden!
Among horny cassowaries bumbles a solo red robin - lissome
Betwixt morbid jackals tumbles a solo cervid, a deer lovesome
Along the Blue Super Giants funks a solo red dwarf star handsome
In the smutty cabbage skunks shrinks solo cherry blossom awesome,
Think-tank! Sink-sank! A lonely pink rose shrinks in only garden!
A one of a kind write on loneliness. Sometimes loneliness could fuel our mind and heart to write a wonderful poem. Liked the penultimate stanza. Beautifully crafted.
Thank for your beautiful comment my fellow poet Rose Marie ππππ
spontaneity is the weapon you have marveled in your loneliness...........studded with fun! ! to share you eager is a genre of your fervor may be time is to deliver a shoulder for you to lie on; its not difficult to curl on pros its struggling on crons its thick in pink discloses in wink its a sapphire under dawns to pluck its worthwhile to wait while walking miles! !
i very powerful poetry...rich language..the poet has good command in the language i like the tittle too....nice use of alliteration...i like it...top..marks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful piece of poetry! Fascinating expression...eexcellent choice of diction! Each stanza sparkles like a precious stone...loved reading this beautiful poem....Top score!
Sir thank you for a precious review on the poem ππ