This 'Eve' Releases And Frees Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

This 'Eve' Releases And Frees

Rating: 5.0


The 'eve' of fresh beginnings approach.
And this one does not linger to sit,
Upon a threshold wishing to cross.

It takes a leap into a future unknown,
Like any other.
But unlike another...
This 'eve' releases and frees us to live,
A quality of life so abundant in cleared comprehension.

It comes as 'if' a sweetened existence has been added,
With unexpected spice,
Liked.
And savored by all to enjoy.

And 'threats' of any kind,
Seem to be wiped away with stress from our minds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 28 December 2009

Great piece, Lawrence, I hope you practice what you preach...Nevertheless, your talent has been proven, one more time, God Bless You! Keep it up, there is only one life to live and nobody promised you a rose garden, God Bless You and have a healthy Happy New Year! 10+++

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Poetic Soul 28 December 2009

A well penned write, our new year will be enjoyable.

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