Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 56,607 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

This 'Eve' Releases And Frees - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The 'eve' of fresh beginnings approach.
And this one does not linger to sit,
Upon a threshold wishing to cross.

It takes a leap into a future unknown,
Like any other.
But unlike another...
This 'eve' releases and frees us to live,
A quality of life so abundant in cleared comprehension.

It comes as 'if' a sweetened existence has been added,
With unexpected spice,
And savored by all to enjoy.

And 'threats' of any kind,
Seem to be wiped away with stress from our minds.

Comments about This 'Eve' Releases And Frees by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Romeo Della Valle (12/28/2009 8:21:00 PM)

    Great piece, Lawrence, I hope you practice what you preach...Nevertheless, your talent has been proven, one more time, God Bless You! Keep it up, there is only one life to live and nobody promised you a rose garden, God Bless You and have a healthy Happy New Year! 10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • (12/28/2009 7:25:00 PM)

    A well penned write, our new year will be enjoyable. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, August 1, 2011

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