Thampi KEE

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This Morning With My God - Poem by Thampi KEE

Then You write.......
Let’s feel free to sing song of love
love will reflects in our eyes…

Let’s sing the morning prayer
Rhythmed by this cool morning and with our heart beats.
Let’s feel the caressing breeze and its love
Lets pray God, its brings the fragrance of roses
Towards love…Godly love
Let’s touch this morning sunrays…
With our stretched hand in hand
Let’s walk free my dear,
Go towards unknown shores'

(I wish to read and keep and to write) .

In the morning when I awake
I see your lovely face in the heart of cool breeze and silence
In the morning when I awake
I really felt you are mine
In the morning when I see you
I am in love
When I go to a walk
not to pray...
I see you are near for a dear walk
I really owe, full of passion....
Not to work
full of mad love
want to fly, over hills and valleys
beyond my wildest dreams of love
and pray, thy, take through
this oceans of love
when I go to bed
I really feel, you are here
Now we are in bed... and in love


Comments about This Morning With My God by Thampi KEE

  • Valsa George (8/7/2018 12:14:00 AM)


    A beautiful love song to God! Love each line of it! Keep writing dear friend! (Report) Reply

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  • (4/20/2011 2:04:00 AM)


    Nice write about your relationship with God! ! Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani (8/13/2009 12:31:00 AM)


    Awesome. If everyone share yr idea, Heaven is on earth. tks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2008 10:14:00 AM)


    '.............................Godly love
    Let’s touch this morning sunrays…
    With our stretched hand in hand
    Let’s walk free my dear,
    Go towards unknown shores'
    very good lines...one must be really fortunate to be friendly with God...good feel, thampi
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2007 8:56:00 PM)


    I Like the following poetic utterace in this piece:
    Rhythmed by this cool morning and with our heart beats.
    Let’s feel the caressing breeze and its love…the heart of cool breeze and silence…near for a dear walk
    (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (5/21/2007 2:14:00 AM)


    wow! this is a lovely relationship my dear poet....
    with your God............Loving and faithful......full mark bhakthi?
    like Meera with Krishnan.........
    (Report) Reply

  • (3/29/2007 5:35:00 AM)


    this is very exotic..wonderfull..filled with a blend of emotions... (Report) Reply

  • Cyclopseven R (12/25/2006 11:59:00 AM)


    Lovingly faithful you are. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2006 10:29:00 PM)


    it's nice to read your poem, it is great and lovely~~

    keep it up ^^

    joni
    (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (10/5/2006 1:09:00 AM)


    A beautiful picture of true love Thampi, thankyou so much, you have no idea what this meant to me----Melvina (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2006 7:44:00 AM)


    love is ecstasy -that is reflected in the lines (Report) Reply

  • (7/20/2006 8:07:00 AM)


    A tender and touching verse. I like the first part very much because it shows originality and gives insight. Joy of life and love reflected in these lines. (Report) Reply

  • (6/28/2006 7:36:00 AM)


    that was good thampi...you have improved so much its unbeleivable...keep it up...nalini (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2006 2:37:00 AM)


    That's so sweet and loving Kee, I like the tenderness in the last line: 'Now we are in bed...and in love'. A picture of surrendering love. I am going to forward this poem to the one I love...Love you Kee, Nibedita. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 29, 2010


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