Those two eyes' magnetic and beckoning gesture
Are so mesmerizing with their opulence and glitter.
They seem to be two shining beads of morning dew
Glittering with a glaring sheen in the morning sun beam.
I am blinded, shaken and surrendered to them
Those eyes had stolen me and I fell in love with them
I was so content and delighted, having a filling
As if I was walking in air.
O' dear -
I loved you, love you and will love you for ever.
Mesmerizing, those two beautiful eyes-
Are unforgettable for ever! !
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Amitava (1.9.2015) 7-00 am
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WOW' its a beautiful peace of a love poem, adoring the person whom you love, so pure and eternal! !
A truly awesome poem, magnetic just like those eyes. I agree with Valsa below eyes say so much without the use of words. Beautiful poem.....10
Yes, I've been there too - Your poem brings it back to my mind - She was Lebanese in background, dark hair and dark eyes, and she made me think I was walking on air currents for about three weeks and then she grounded me for reasons she never explained - WE CAN STILL BE FRIENDS she said as if that was a possibility!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Perfect depiction. Fantastic expression. Thanks for sharing...... 10
Thank you for appreciating my poem