Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 22,042 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Those Mesmerizing Eyes - Poem by Amitava Sur

Those two eyes' magnetic and beckoning gesture
Are so mesmerizing with their opulence and glitter.
They seem to be two shining beads of morning dew
Glittering with a glaring sheen in the morning sun beam.

I am blinded, shaken and surrendered to them
Those eyes had stolen me and I fell in love with them

I was so content and delighted, having a filling
As if I was walking in air.

O' dear -
I loved you, love you and will love you for ever.

Mesmerizing, those two beautiful eyes-
Are unforgettable for ever! !
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Amitava (1.9.2015) 7-00 am


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Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Those Mesmerizing Eyes by Amitava Sur

  • (9/8/2015 7:18:00 PM)


    Another lovely poem from a love filled heart. (Report) Reply

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  • Liza Sudina (9/8/2015 1:28:00 PM)


    I rarely feel such love - and envy you a little! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/7/2015 12:01:00 PM)


    Love touches the heart. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (9/7/2015 5:44:00 AM)


    A truly awesome poem, magnetic just like those eyes. I agree with Valsa below eyes say so much without the use of words. Beautiful poem.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (9/7/2015 2:32:00 AM)


    Yes, I've been there too - Your poem brings it back to my mind - She was Lebanese in background, dark hair and dark eyes, and she made me think I was walking on air currents for about three weeks and then she grounded me for reasons she never explained - WE CAN STILL BE FRIENDS she said as if that was a possibility! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/6/2015 7:48:00 AM)


    Eyes immediately catch our attention if they are lively and beautiful! So much has been written about beautiful eyes! They mirror the sorrow or joy within us. They can communicate the language of love without words! I remember having seen your beloved's photograph! Yes she had such beautiful eyes! Enjoyed the poem Amitava! (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/6/2015 10:55:00 AM)

    Tanks a lot Valsa for loving this poem with your your sense of delicacy.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/5/2015 2:57:00 AM)


    Perfect depiction. Fantastic expression. Thanks for sharing...... 10 (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/5/2015 5:40:00 AM)

    Thank you for appreciating my poem

  • (9/5/2015 2:30:00 AM)


    Yes, once you look into the eyes of your love they are unforgettable forever. Their mesmerizing effects never do leave you when remembering. Your rhythm is precise and even throughout your poem, Amitava. Love this poem, give you a 10! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • (9/5/2015 2:00:00 AM)


    WOW' its a beautiful peace of a love poem, adoring the person whom you love, so pure and eternal! ! (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/5/2015 5:39:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot Srabanti for liking my poem

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/5/2015 1:59:00 AM)


    Superb........Magic of eye well thought..........love it. (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/5/2015 5:05:00 AM)

    thanks for appreciating the poem

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 5, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 25, 2015


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