Thrashing Poem by Glen Kappy

Thrashing

Rating: 5.0


from "While Passing Through"/Spring

Spring night, winds thrashing.
In bed I hack and hack…
—one nostril for air.

Wednesday, April 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: spring,wind,sickness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 28 April 2019

You’ve been sick, Glen? Allergies? Sorry to hear it. No fun trying to sleep when you’re all blocked up. Hope you’re all fixed up now.

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Glen Kappy 28 April 2019

yes, better now from a doozy of a cold. to me there seemed a parallel to the wind outside and my tossing, turning, and sleeplessness. thanks for your comment and concern. blessings! -glen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 April 2019

A well penned haiku, sir Glen....10+++++++++

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Glen Kappy 11 April 2019

thank you, bernard. and compared to the night described, i had a really good night's sleep last night for which i'm grateful. -glen

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2019

Thrashing of spring night's wind is interestingly expressed. This poem is very brilliant definitely. An excellent sharing is done.10

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Glen Kappy 11 April 2019

thank you once again, kumarmani, for reading and commenting. interesting when the conditions outside seems to mirror those in us. -glen

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