! ! ! ! ! ! Threads Of Bondage++! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Rehan Hyder

! ! ! ! ! ! Threads Of Bondage++! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 3.1


Lifelong voids that love creates:
caresses suspended on limbs
unseen moist on parched lips
an undressing lingering look
perched on the curves of flesh
your fingers tugging at my wrist

++ Inspired by Helen’s “What once bound us”. Christened and tweaked by my dear friend Wardha! ! Thanks ladies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 24 October 2008

what once binds, binds till the last breath though not overtly secure in that secret space within...it touched me, rehan!

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Reshma Ramesh 21 October 2008

beautiful............well done

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Viola Grey 19 October 2008

this is a beautiful gem of lines here...absolutely divine

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 10 October 2008

well well well..it looks even better on the official PH page....somehow reading work on this platform seems to elevate it in standing and even, if thats possible, in composition! ....its an excellent excerpt from the vast galaxy of your creativity.

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